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Aquafied
2007-12-30
ch 1,
abuseloneliness always feels like a fileting rip to me.
review
2007-12-15
ch 1,
abuseyeah this is really sad.
i like the "& i could feel (almost)" part.
simpleplan13
2007-11-23
ch 1,
abuseI like this a lot... the title is great and I like the line about the invisible barrier and the part in quotes.. great piece
Miz E. Mak
2007-11-16
ch 1,
abusedepressingly, beautiful.
it's like a sad photograph.
write on.
smile for the sunshine
2007-11-16
ch 1,
abuseAw, that was so sad. But I thought that, again, it was well written. Good work. = )
The Postscript
2007-11-12
ch 1,
abuseNice! There were many little components of the poem that I just adored. For one, the use of the word "tug". It is such an acurate word for this piece! Good job with diction in other places as well. I also really love the lines "i'll be following/the rise and fall of our feelings/to the very end". Really great write that tugs on my own heart as well. Keep writing, k.
marinawings
2007-11-12
ch 1,
abusewow. chills. this one definitely gave me chills. there's a pleasant, haunting cadence to it that lends atmosphere. i can definitely feel the emotions this poem conveys. good work!
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