This was good, I liked it a lot. =) Hm, you stole my idea! No - I'm kidding. I was thinking of doing this, but never got to it (I'm too lazy), but now I'm glad I didn't. I can't wait to read the next one. xD

Aw... I feel sorry for her. This is actually true with lots of people!

Cubs, this is gorgeous. I think perhaps you could go back and tighten the language a little more (for instance, get rid of the 'are' and have 'her arms rigid') (I'm obsessed with "parring down" at the moment, courtesy of my course =P) but - this evoked a very vivid little image, and I found it enchanting =)
Lovely lovely lovely xx

aha! I signed in! ;)
that is pretty, you really need to write more original ;) love how it's vague and unclear, yet very descriptive and just..flows so well ;P
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I FOUND YOU! I'm so proud. xD Just so you know I spent half the night looking. *Hugs* xD

Cubie it's fricken awesome from what I can understand, which, being 3am isn't much. xD But it's

I like the idea of imperfection that's such a big part of this piece. It's very... I can't think of a good word, but it works. The image of the failing writer is one none of us particularly like to call up, probably because of bad karma or whatever, so kudos for picking a realistic idea!

I noticed one thing - you use a lot of passive voice in this. It might just be the style, but it's jarring, especially in the beginning.

Anyway, this was great, Cuba! More, more!