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| yui ikari 2007-11-21 ch 1,  | abuseNow this is something. Kind of reminded me of Nick Joaquin's works. Fragmented, and yeah, I ended up a bit confused lol. I think lines 15-16 are awesome. Great job! |
| 1Wanderer 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseWhile untraditional in format, the poem is fantastic. I loved the fact that you didn't use "normal" words to get your point across and the fact that you had so many symbols in your poem. Again, fantastically done. Bravo/Brava. |