Oh, amen. I've been here before and it -aches-.

great poem,I really enjoyed it.

Faith

Sweet, its short but it would keep anyone reading, great rhymes used, every word was thought over before hand, great work, keep writing!

Lurid

Nice poem.

Twilight Starr

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This is really good, I want to say the same thing to someone but I doubt it will work. I'll be adding this to my favs and my C2. Great job!

Kristie Marie

Good job.. I really liked it. :]

And it relates to most people.

Good job with this. I liked the last stanza, how you broke your format and italicized the last line. Both worked well for this poem. Keep up the good work!