|Reviews for If Only|
| i'd delete this if possible 5/13/08 . chapter 1
Oh, amen. I've been here before and it -aches-.
| Faith Adeline 2/4/08 . chapter 1
great poem,I really enjoyed it.
| Lurid Black 1/11/08 . chapter 1
Sweet, its short but it would keep anyone reading, great rhymes used, every word was thought over before hand, great work, keep writing!
| Twilight Starr 11/24/07 . chapter 1
| life like whoa 11/22/07 . chapter 1
| XxXKristie MarieXxX 11/13/07 . chapter 1
This is really good, I want to say the same thing to someone but I doubt it will work. I'll be adding this to my favs and my C2. Great job!
| ContemplativeJoyce 11/12/07 . chapter 1
Good job.. I really liked it. :]
And it relates to most people.
| sylvia's syndrome 11/12/07 . chapter 1
Good job with this. I liked the last stanza, how you broke your format and italicized the last line. Both worked well for this poem. Keep up the good work!