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| IlfirinEstel 2008-05-13 ch 1,  | abuseOh, amen. I've been here before and it -aches-. |
| Faith Adeline 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abusegreat poem,I really enjoyed it. Faith |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseSweet, its short but it would keep anyone reading, great rhymes used, every word was thought over before hand, great work, keep writing! ~Lurid~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseNice poem. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| life like whoa 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuse**.brilliant. |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good, I want to say the same thing to someone but I doubt it will work. I'll be adding this to my favs and my C2. Great job! Kristie Marie |
| ContemplativeJoyce 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseGood job.. I really liked it. :] And it relates to most people. |
| sylvia's syndrome 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseGood job with this. I liked the last stanza, how you broke your format and italicized the last line. Both worked well for this poem. Keep up the good work! |