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| Soosie 2008-03-22 ch 1,  | abuseI love the way you mix dialogue with descriptions. I would say "good job" but that makes me sound like a teacher so I won't. But this is amazing! I hope you write more :D |
| Twilight Starr 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseGood start. I think you have everything right for the era and all, but I wouldn't know. It sounded right. :) Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~ |