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| RockFan 2008-02-25 ch 8,  | abuseI love it, naturally and it's about time you updated (just kidding). I'm glad Beau's back, sort of. You have me going two different ways here! Update soon and thanks for the promo! |
| RockFan 2008-02-04 ch 7, | abuseVery sweet! And exciting. I love this story! Can't wait for the next update. |
| RockFan 2007-11-27 ch 6, | abuseI still love Beau. Can I console him? Wow. Very emotional. Wow. And the photography part is exceptional. Wow. Update soon! |
| RockFan 2007-11-27 ch 5, | abuseDON'T DO THIS TO ME! I guess I'm awake now! |
| RockFan 2007-11-20 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter! It's got me on a rollercoaster of emotions. I absolutely adore Beau but then Malakye comes back and I'm like...oh kiss her again! *Sigh* |
| RockFan 2007-11-20 ch 3, | abuseAm loving it. Hey, you should allow anonymous reviews...you'd prolly get more. I did. Anyway, on to next chapter. |
| Twizler519 2007-11-20 ch 2, | abuseI really like this so far. Your characters seem so real, which is really hard to find in a story these days. Keep it coming please! |
| artistic dreamer 2007-11-13 ch 2, | abusecool! this story is off to a great start, i just read your other story, and this one, and i like the plot, it seems like selia has a lot on her right now, mom's divorce, love life...and all that teenage drama, haha, oh, i have a question, are they Christians? it sorta seems like they are, if they are, that's awesome! oh yeah, actually i have one more question, is selia fifteen or sixteen, in chapter one, it says fifteen, has a month already gone by? i hope to read you next chapters soon, for both stories! sorry 'bout the long review, i tend to write a lot, keep writing! can't wait to see what happens! oh yeah, one more thing...ROCKFAN SENT ME! lol (her stories are awesome too!) |
| RockFan 2007-11-12 ch 2, | abuseAm loving it. Continue, please. |
| RockFan 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseExcellent start. The religious theme is great, don't worry about it. This story drew me in immediately. Loved it. On to chapter 2. |