I love the title. I'm just starting to read this so expect reviews soon enough :)

I love the style of your narration! It's very very cool. I love the way your writing flows. It's all very very awesome. Keep writing, and I promise I'll keep reading!

Update soon or I WILL kill you with my evil, evil spork. It'll be slow and painful, and I'm going to enjoy it. Coolios?
^.^

Just great...I already love Mack..and Pwalker :]...keep it up

Yay! I love this story! Can you please continue it? I really like Lester's character and Izzy has this wierd likeable character too - in a way. And also Mack is totally hilarious. I take it that Bing -Pwalker, Josiah... whatever- is in love wih Mack? Eh?Eh?(What? it's contagious!) Please continue asap, ok? I want to see Mack get her revenge on Izzy and Lester. Oh, and I also want to see Mikey's reaction. And... well, the thing is, continue the story. It's turning out very nice, and hilarious too - though I admit at first I thought that Mack was a loony. But the Kim Possible thing? Priceless. The Fat-Man-In-A-Box stunt? Priceless as well. You get the message though. I'll be waiting urgently for the next chapter. And maintain your amount of Lester (Please?) and increase the amounts of Mikey and Bing, if you get my drift.

LOLOLOLOL! Great chapter! Loved the part where Mack got thrown in the ocean...loved the part where Lester got covered in pillows...and the part where he wouldn't pay up...and...all of the parts. :D I would have reviewed earlier but I just finished reading the chapter before my family and I were heading out to the Higher Ground music festival (which was awesome btw, Casting Crowns, MercyMe, W00T XD) and just now got back so here I am reviewing...and rambling. I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!! :D

Ah! MIKE HAS A GIRLFRIEND! I don't really know why I wrote that in caps since Mike hasn't really been around long enough for me to know much about him, but it seemed like the proper reaction.

Aww, Josi-wosy was jealous! How cute, hahah. I wonder if Lester likes Mack though; I hadn't thought about that before this chapter. Till next time then!

SO. VERY. FUNNY.
I can't wait to read more!

CHEERS!
~Jeni

Have no fear, Kyllex is here!!

Lol. Okay, so this chapter was awesome! I love Josiah, lol he's such a big softie. And Mack is such a weirdo. An awesome weirdo, lol. xD

Uh ooh...Mikey is Bing's sister's boyfriend? (lol that's a mouthful) DRAMA!!

Lol so yeah sorry this review isn't that long, my friend is over and she and my sister are pestering me to get off the computer and do something with them.

So yeah, amazing chapter, I loved it!! Update soon! woo!

-kyllex

P.S. I put up a new story yesterday, lol. And I'd be OH SO HONORED if you read it and helped me edit like you did with my other stuff, lol. xD You don't have to, just thought I'd bring it up.

kthxbye, lol. You rock. xD

i though wow, this is so funny, especially when she threw the pee at him, oh god that was hilarious. i couldn't stop laughing and the under shadowed romance between mack and bing hilarious, but he is turning into quite the gentleman. i cant wait for the next chapter, this was absolutely wonderful.

L. O. L.

Bottle of PEE?! Ahaha! Man, that's HILARIOUS.

Oh, I just gotta say one thing: I LOVE LESTER. Like, seriously, he's so funny! Well, I like all the characters. I really like Josiah too, haha that grumpy turd.

Anyway yeah...great chapter, great story, can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh! I'm gonna go sneak a peek at your character pictures...oh boy do I know how fun those things can be! xD

Haha...see you soon!

Yay!

Cool cool chapter. I love all your characters...they're so hilarious! Josiah. Hmm. You really like J names, don't you? Hehe. Well, all your characters have way more interesting names than mine...I always think of boring, common names. Pfft.

Well well well. I really liked this chapter! :D

Oh yeah, and and and!! My best friends at camp, and she told me, "You better send me some letters! And maybe a cute oneshot to occupy me? Hehe..." So guess what? I sent her your "Pwned". Because, it's just that awesome.

I told her she better review when she gets back! You deserve the love.

LAWL.

Okay, so, I can't believe I never read this before. I mean, I love all your other stuff...so yeah!

anyway. About the story. I like it a lot so far! Mackenzie is so funny. She makes me laugh! And Bingy Boy...lol. I love Friends. :D

Great chapter! *runs off to read the next ones*

ahhaha, wow.

josiah sounds sexy. lawl, anywayy.. i was drinking a bottle of water as i was reading the pee in the bottle part. x'D.

so i got freaked out and chucked the thing all the way across my room.

not the point.

hehe, loved the whole thing.

update soon? :D

Lester...what a hard name to stereotype, hm.

Wow, that had to be overwhelmingly humiliating. Josi seemed a tad jealous as well. Cute, very cute. So what's up with Mike? You're being so mysterious.