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| Guardrail 2007-12-03 ch 1,  | abuseReally wonderfully written. I love the nostalgia you've captured in this poem. Very beautiful, both in words and in concept. |
| Susannah Simon 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseoh i like it!! very inspirational. and so true! you really covered every aspect of getting older. except for losing memories... but then the piece wouldn't be titled "i remember"... i'm babbling. punctuation would be nice :D or something before the next "i remember". without it, it was a little hard to read at the beginning. but i got the hang of it by the end. this piece has distinct tone too. very nice! |