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| writersblock101 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseit was really good its like u lived it or u knew someone that had been in that situation i jst couldnt stop reading newaii r u going 2 write more storys? i cnt wait if u do writersblock101 |
| under the influence 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseNot bad. I wish there were more details and more paragraph breaks, but I liked it :) |
| iloveanimecartoons 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was so deep. It felt such cleansing yet frustrating form of closure for poor Angela. Wow, your writing style is really nice in it feels real--from real-life experiances. I can't help but feel for Angela as the truth she'd search for all those years came crashing around her in the window of 2 days and with revealation sometimes comes more questions. I must say, I'd be PO with my parents as well but still grateful for what I had. Great job! I hope you write more soon, kittylur1! -iloveanimecartoons |