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Reviews For: The One who Got Away

writersblock101
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abuseit was really good
its like u lived it or u knew someone that had been in that situation i jst couldnt stop reading
newaii r u going 2 write more storys? i cnt wait if u do
writersblock101
under the influence
2007-11-30
ch 1,
abuseNot bad. I wish there were more details and more paragraph breaks, but I liked it :)
iloveanimecartoons
2007-11-15
ch 1,
abuseThat was so deep. It felt such cleansing yet frustrating form of closure for poor Angela. Wow, your writing style is really nice in it feels real--from real-life experiances. I can't help but feel for Angela as the truth she'd search for all those years came crashing around her in the window of 2 days and with revealation sometimes comes more questions. I must say, I'd be PO with my parents as well but still grateful for what I had. Great job! I hope you write more soon, kittylur1!

-iloveanimecartoons
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