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| Twilight Starr 2008-07-03 ch 1,  | abuseGreat story. I love that song. Nice work. Keep writing! Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Miss KK 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseI really love this. Honestly. It's amazing. |
| high-kick 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is so sad and very well written. I really hope you'd continue this. |
| Death Tastes Like Cherries 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseI like it. Evanesance is an awesome band. Imaginary is my very favorite song. Well done. |
| masterful me 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuse"The candy clouds roll by in the purple sky, singing lullabies to sooth my frayed soul." -- This is my favorite line. You're very poetic without delving into being cliche. This would make the beginning to such a wonderful supernatural story! If you continue it, please let me know. I'd like to know more about the mysterious girl and mysterious boy; it's very sweet and just the right amount of angst. Nice work! |
| Kaede Kitsurani 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseOoh. Very intriguing. Glad you wrote it. Thanks for the review. I honestly hope you weren't offended. Anyway...I do believe your name is Raven, yes? =) |
| Tragically Charismatic 2007-12-20 ch 1, | abuseWow. I love it. This was brilliant. So convincing. The poor girl. You portray her fear and confusion really well. I like how the italics really emphasise certain lines. I love the line - In my field of paper flowers, I lie inside my self for hours and watch the world fly by without me. Beautiful job. |
| Kadence 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseWow...this was great. :) I loved how you portrayed everything, like how she doesn't want to come back to pain. It's great. I hope to see more. - K |