Ooh, I really liked this chapter :D
Update soon!
~Mia

Wow, this is really interesting! I can't wait to find out how Mrs. Brown knows the Ichijouji family.

o0o0o im interested even morenow

Interesting lol. Shin just always seems to catch Rika at her worst moments...which sucks, actually but he seems to like her nevertheless so she's good hehe.

I know this is your Nano piece (my computer broke and I lost mine at 17,0 words!! I cried for days), the only thing I would suggest for future chapters or whatever, is sometimes when you write "do not," for example in dialogue it makes reading it a little awkward. Other than that, I loved it :D

Update soon!

~Mia

Hm. I like it, it definitely has promise. I hope to read more. Good luck with nano.

Hah. I do like this. I think it could be proofed one more time, but other than that, I agree that the conversation is realistic for a first. I always did love Rika and Shin :) Update soon...this is definitely interesting :P
Kisses,
midnightbeauty

Haha, I can so imagine how awkward that conversation would be--loved it :D
Continue and Update soon!!
~Mia

I'm excited for this story. (Can you please update the other version sequel of Osamu and Sara's story? Pretty please with cherries on top?)

aw cute meeting

It looks good to me my friend. I hope you go continue it because I deep down enjoy your Sarah/Osamu Universe and seeing how A mahor part of the universe came along is a key part of the Universe.