I. **. LOVE/WORSHIP/ADORE?IDOLIZE/ My Chemical Romance, they are truly incredible! Seriously, I'm their biggest obssesor, ever!. This story is great - MCR, love, vampires, its perfect. good job. all hail the black parade!

OMFG!

*O*

*stares wide-eyed at the screen for a long, long time*

Oh my god! What the hell was that!? How can you write so well? What the- what the-
Okay, seeing as you apparently don't check these things very often and all, I wouldn't want to spam you or anything. :) It's Esther's french penpal, remember me? *grins* I know, things have been hectic and I was an ** for no apparent reason before, but hey! It's been practically an entire year since we last 'communicated', and I find it awesome that you're a writer (or at least, you come up with insane ideas and you have an insane writing style) too. I'll be watching you, you know. *hitches up eyebrow* This story's just too damn good/gory/everything that I like and PLUS it's written with particular style... oh, alright, call me deranged if I love this story so much, but hey, it was YOUR idea, so technically we're both fond of twisted things. *crooked grin* And I can't wait to see where this goes. That ending was incredible. And wow, I'm gushing like hell here.
Hope to hear from you sooner or later? :) If you would still deign to talk to me, of course. I know, I was a complete, retarded ** before, if you remember. :D But! It doesn't matter if you can't be bothered to acknowledge me, you know, I'm not one of those super duper people and I may not be very much worth anyone's time- it depends on who you ask- and besides I'll still be whoring your profile page till you update this marvellous thing. And spamming you incase you don't reply, of course, as is customary. :D
Take care!
-Sei/winter
xoxox

Estora: RHY-ANA...
*Throws raincoat*
Rhiana: It's RHEE-ANNA! *Throws raincoat back*
Estora: ...What-EVER... *Shoves raincoat down shirt*

...

I just can't get over that!! Anyways, just here to ask when you plan on posting Chapter Two..? Isn't it nearly finished? Well, when you want to update, just tap me on the shoulder next History or Geography or Drama class.

Speaking of Drama...

Estora: Okay, okay, listen to this - two women...
Rhiana: ...Both alike in dignity, in fair - Australia - where we lay our scene...

I LOVE IT!

Well, bye for now. And for goodness sakes, start checking your emails more often!!

Cheers,

~ Estora ~

Wow. You write really well. I was completely drawn to this story by the title and that summary that wasn't really a summary. It's been a while since I've read a first chapter that really drew me in like this did. Keep up the good work. I only saw like typo and a few random ':'. I can't wait to see where this story goes especially if it's going to be a romance. So update again soon.