konban wa

Yes! Finally a poem not about: "I can't live without you; I'd give up my friends and religion for you -- just to have you break my hear tin the end." *rolls eyes* Sure, they can be well-written; but I think that has become the sole topic on fictionpress as of late. This was like a breath of fresh air. *grin* Lovely, lovely job.

Zaijen
-Shan-

This is a powerful piece, and elegantly written to boot. Keep up the great work!

there's a bittersweet sadness to this, but also a sense of assurance. well written.