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| crazyrandomgirl888 2008-06-19 ch 1,  | abuseyou implied that your feeling "love" but you don't realize it yourself. very very good! i've had the same feelings and this expresses them perfectly! |
| TheDJ 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant, as always, the varying stanza lengths, the quick paced nature of the poem add to the unstable feeling you were working in. Congratulations, as always, on a wonderful poem. --TheDJ |