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Reviews For: Day Dream

o2l2
2007-11-13
ch 1,
abuseFun with an interesting twist at the end. I have been reading many stories today, and this is the best that i have seen today. There were no cliches, it wasnt overdone, there were no confusing allusions.It short and sweet. I think many of the writers here forget that writing is about quality not quantity. Writing is an art and you have just created a Mona lisa, or at least a starry night.

Thank you
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