Wonderful poem, it's strange how when someone thinks your acting different and you're really just being yourself. Keep it Up!

This was good! I liked the words you used to describe your emotions in the poem, and your message got through really well! I liked your setup with the short verses and how you ended the poem, contrasting to the start!

Keep at it and write more!

The Reverse Edge Blade

Cool poem. I like it a lot. Write on! :)

Anna _