Haha this was a cute little story blurb. I think it would have been better if the last line was just like the others - Katie laughs.. because adding all the other stuff in breaks the repetition that was so effective. :P

I wonder if this is based off of a true story (hm)

The mystery of what is really going on and why Katie hates "you" and everything makes this story funny and kind of eerie, like a Tim Burton film haha. But not like creepy. Anyway. Good job with this! It's clever and cute and a tiny bit spooky. Lurve!

-Jesse
Attack of the review marathon! (link in my profile)

That is funny. I think I really like Katie! She is like totally awesome!

But- but HEY! Whoa! Stop! WHERE did all this imagination come from!? What the hell?! How can you just come up with something like this!? Ah... my sweet, dear little penpal, I knew you were good but THIS is really, really good. It almost seems like another twisted version of a good ol' nursery rhyme, except that- and I'm sorry if I'm being totally stupid and this actually IS a nursery rhyme, it's that believable if it isn't- you thought all of this up, and I find the idea absolutely genius. I was actually waiting for Katie to be some hideous imaginary friend and/or Sadie's schizophrenic alter-ego who would murder everyone at the end, and that the ending would be a killer phrase like "And Sadie, standing amidst the twisted corpses with the little dagger still clasped between her sticky, blood stained fingers, whispered to the wind... 'Katie did it!'"
HEY, knowing you, that would be entirely possible. And in better phrasing than that, obviously. *foxy grin* But, I think that the real version is actually much better, since it's cute and funny and somewhat freaky, like something just a little too bright and light and fluffy to really be innocent.
I love the feel of this supposedly "just randomly thought-up-of" ficlet. :D Ah, I would give my LIFE to be able to spend a day in your head in order to see what kinds of insane daydreams your mind must process. That would be pretty darn incredible. :D
Lovely little piece of work! Onto the next... this "Thou Shalt Kill" trilogy is VERY tempting... ah! See you in another hot second...

-Sei (your side-kick for gory ideas *winks suggestively*)
(*ignores you slowly backing away*)
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Wow! You have quite an imagination...
I like this story, it's funny, original and ever so slightly off the wall!
Keep writing, please?!

Lol creepy girl-I feel sorry for Sadie.

0.o...

Slightly freaky- brilliant none the less!

Thanks for writing,

-Iris

p.s. Sorry for the rushed review; in a hurry >

OH MY GOD.

That's is SO screwed up. Not even lying.

You're my new favorite person. Ever.