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| Musei 2008-05-23 ch 6, | abuseOh. My. God. I've been searching for an original fic JUST LIKE THIS for ages - high school slashy-drama/humour with cool characters, music references and swear words. Seriously. I love this /so much/. Alex rocks my socks. In fact, all the characters do. Saul is brilliant with his stalkerish tendancies. Conrad seems really sweet. We haven't had much character development from any of the other guys, but they all seem really cool and individual and quirky. And 'Kit Fortune'? Best damn name ever! Poor Kit, not able to function without coffee! XD And always staring at Alex's nails. Welp, can't really fault him there those are some pretty unique nails. I hope this is still updating...? I loves it, anyway! |
| nonaccount 2007-11-27 ch 6, | abuseYay! You kind of heeded my call for more Conrad-Saul interaction. :) And Yay! more Alex-Kit stuff too! That shower scene (I'm glad you made it clear that although it seems pretty unfeasible, "along with his current state of mind [. . .] goes some way in explaining why he simply opened the door without knocking") was amusing too. I was hoping that Alex would make him squirm more in the bathroom, but maybe in the not-too-distant future? It was sweet that Alex made him coffee too. Lookin' forward to more. :) |
| Error-Author 2007-11-22 ch 6, | abuseYay! Nekkid shower barging in's! Nothing better than nekkid shower barging in's! I think you just inspired me... I may go out today, sit in a small cafe and try to write my brains out! Huzzah, see what your fantastic work does to me? That, and I envy your talent for jugling a large amount of characters in one scene setting. Apparently, I've found, I suck at this. Damn the fluff's-two-person thing. Now I'm stuck. lol Great chapter dear! I'm so happy- this totally made my morning! Lurve EA |
| Error-Author 2007-11-14 ch 5, | abuseAw.. I totally was hoping for some sneaky snuggling. " The last pancake was dragged off the plate by a sleepy looking George, who stuffed it in his mouth before sliding off the booth chair and lying prone on the ground. āIām done for, lads. Tell my folks I died bravely, subduing the pancake invasion!ā He groaned, and Ferret prodded him with his foot. " Best mental image ever. Merryl is awesome. I'm having a bit of trouble distinguishing the four secondary guys though; George, Ferret, Lan and Matthew. Matthew not so much, but the rest blur together for me. Not sure if that matters lol or if they will play any bigger roles than they do now, but -shrug- thought I'd bring it up. I have nothing important to nitpick about lmao Nice set up and awesomely long chapters! You know I love your work with a firey passion of, uh, love. Adoration. Devotee-ism. Keep it up, Trill! And Changes? -big puppy eyes- soonish? Maybe? Perhps? Pretty please with a cherry on top? Much lurve to you and your amazing fiction that steals my soul! |
| Error-Author 2007-11-14 ch 4, | abuseYay! Crazy blue haired kid! You shouldn't have mentioned Naruto; now I have an orange haired ninja in my head everytime he crops up. And yay for friends ^_^ One thing I noticed, you never described Conrad. Curious to what he looks like. A third yay for dancing gay boys! Dancing with gay boys is lots of fun too ^_= heh, I totally have a guilty obsession with FOB... I had it blasting in my car for the hour drive to and back from my friend's place. I have a headache now, but it was totally worth it. |
| Error-Author 2007-11-14 ch 3, | abuseWhoot! Part-ah! Bleh, heck with geography! I don't believe in it either. Do you know I spent like three hours in a bookstore today without a single purchase? And I was looking for anything by the end. I come home, and blam, new story from my Trill-y. Much love to you and having the best story in all of Chapters Bookstore. -wants to meet Alex- -and Conrad- -and the other party guys- Yay for Kit and his dislike of math. Boo for math. |
| Error-Author 2007-11-14 ch 2, | abuse" he waited for the other boys grin." boy's? Am I wrong? -shrug- almost too pointless to mention lol. Do mung-beans exist? Such a mystery indeed! Wikipedia them. Let's start a farm and make millions. Or else open a Mung-Bean coffee place. Or are mung-beans like lima beans? Cause that wouldn't be so cool... Here's your limabean latte sir. Who be this Alex? And Saul is nifty ^_^ Yay for your new characters! Chappie three, away! -flies away, cape flapping- |
| Error-Author 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abusezomg another story!! Ooer, nice setup- full of potential. Eheh.. Mung-beans... Heh. "..a few trees and garden beds that were mostly bushes and ill-disguised weeds vying for life in poor soil." Dunno why, but that was my favorite line. Poor ill-disguised weeds. They are the true victims of your stories. Nice job capturing the true essence of teenage boy language too. I always have trouble with the whole male thing.. perhaps I can blame it on most of my characters being homosexual... >.> |
| nonaccount 2007-11-13 ch 5, | abuseReally enjoying this story so far and can't wait for more! :) You've kinda touched on it, but why is Kit so hesitant to come out if not to everyone than at least Saul? Speaking of which, I really like Saul and wouldn't mind reading more about Saul and Conrad - hint, hint. |
| nonaccount 2007-11-13 ch 4, | abuseYay! Alex makes more than just a peripheral appearance. More to come, I hope. :) |