Reviews for MOTFF: Master of The Four Flames

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Kumitzin 2008-05-19 ch 4,	abusehey! nice story, altough there's still lot of room for improvement. Why don't you beguin by checking your redaction, its confusing most of the time. Also you seem to jump from scene to scene too fast (maybe that's why it gets all too confusing) I like Stef's character
MoonfireSpam23 2008-05-09 ch 19,	abuseAlso, because he got me watching this show called “Naruto” and the idea for both Kira and this version of Rika came about. Pfft. Bleach>Naruto (bows) Honored to have helped!
MoonfireSpam23 2008-05-09 ch 18,	abuseNow it's the last chapter. I'm not going to bother with any more advice... Cuz I've said it all before!
MoonfireSpam23 2008-05-09 ch 17,	abuseAww, the last chapter! They spent the night in the Kevoronai, with a Sleep Spell on each, so they would be well rested for the upcoming fight that would decide the fate of Greangrana. I wish I could sleep with a sleep spell. >.> “Flame’s wishes. Yume’s wishes. Mom’s wishes. Tiff’s wishes. Mélë’s wishes. Demerian’s wishes. Our wishes. We came here so that we could fulfill those wishes.” I understand why you did it, but wishes still sounds really repetitive.
MoonfireSpam23 2008-05-09 ch 16,	abuseAhh, you updated soo many chapters at one time! (laughs) You knew we'd kill you if it was Phoenix. :P “I did what you told me,” Stefanie said. “I awakened the Assassin.” Leif laughed, a maniacal laugh. “You’re just as stupid as your mother, Stefanie. You’ve played right into my hands.” If the bad guy told me to do something... I don't think I'd do it.
Equilibrium 2008-05-07 ch 19,	abuseFlatterer. You don't need to flatter me for me to be first on the waiting list when your next story comes up. The bomb is... an initiative for you to keep it up. Deal with it. ^.^
Equilibrium 2008-05-07 ch 18,	abuseIt's a beautiful coincidence that their journey should start AND end at a train station. Not much to say about this epilogue, because it's quite short, but I really liked how Pheonix and Stefanie parted - there's just enough left unsaid to hint at another story to come. (And when it comes, I'll be waiting.)
Equilibrium 2008-05-07 ch 17,	abuseAwesome chapter. The climax where Stefanie battled Alexandris was your best fight scene yet. I also enjoyed the pre-battle mix of nerves and anticipation. It appears Pheonix has quite a way with words - his little speech "Go hard, or go home." gave me the thrills. The only thing I didn't particularly like was the whole "Notice anyone missing?" bit. We all have our moments of hubris, but if Alexandris is as wily and dangerous as he's supposed to be, I think he'd hardly overlook something like that. But other than that, very well done!
Equilibrium 2008-05-07 ch 16,	abuseWahahahaa! 3 whole chapters to read - Happiness! ... At least until I read till the bit where Yume died. It was so sad, mainly because we've come to see him as a person rather than just another side-character. But I'm glad you wrote about him reuniting with Tiffania, Flame, and Marissa - it gave his death some closure. No time for more comments - I'm speeding off to the next chapter...
Equilibrium 2008-05-06 ch 15,	abuseBeautiful chapter. Firstly, the title was great - ominous and anticipation-stirring. Secondly, there was fantastic character development in it. I particularly love the little moment between Pheonix and Stefanie. Lastly, the line “Take strength in the friendship you had and still have. Take pride in the love you shared with him. Take everything you thought you had lost and turn it all into Power.” is magnificent - powerful and touching. I really can't find anything to criticise. Just hurry with the updates, or start worrying about the napalm...
MoonfireSpam23 2008-05-05 ch 15,	abuseUgh, I would go check my saved files on Chrono Cross, but I'm getting sick and NEED to sleep. It's taking all I have in me to review. If I get to feeling better, then I'll load it. What I can say is to not use Harle too much. Along the zipper cover were white shapes that resembled f-holes on a violin or viola. And a cello! Speaking of which, I need to go practice... Dang it, I d'wanna. Another great chapter! Oh, and I must warn you of the consequences of killing off Phoenix... :P
Equilibrium 2008-04-30 ch 14,	abuseHave I mentioned that I love the fantasy-ish feel to this story? I do. I can almost see it in my head like a movie. Glad you finally updated! I've been waiting for this for, like, forever. And I think Pheonix has another new fangirl. XD Don't worry, I wasn't going to napalm your house because you didn't update. Really. hides bomb behind back
MoonfireSpam23 2008-04-29 ch 14,	abuseI love Chrono Cross! The last boss is uber hard though. Have you gotten that far yet? If not, you have to use certain colors of elements in a certain order. >.< Eh, I have no right to be mad at a lack of updates. I had to go on hiatus. He also told Kira and Jin to put the Twilight Power in a safe place. Hmm, not too smart of him after they were just betrayed.
MoonfireSpam23 2008-02-11 ch 13,	abuseIt's fine. After all, this is your story. All I can do is complain. :P Why did they let Kira and Jin back? Or did I miss something because I have to hurry? (Cursed Geometry and German...) So... Why does he want the world destroyed?
The Five 2008-02-11 ch 13,	abuseYou're really improving, especially with regards to character development. I really liked how Stephanie dealt with Flame's death. She didn't go all whiny and oh-i-can't-live-without-him-and-there's-no-purpose-in-life-now-so-i-should-just-die like so many snivelling characters do. Instead, she's level-headedly going to make the one who did it pay up big time. That's some spunk. I approve! ... Nice cliffy, by the way.

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