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| Midnightveil 2008-01-14 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful. Who knew the story of a leaf could be so emotional?! XDD I loved it. Keep it up..=) |
| Thomas Rex 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseWhat a beautifully image! Though sometimes people do save fallen leaves, and the leaves always come back to feed the ground, as you point out. I like your use of visual imagery. I encourage you to work more with that. God bless |