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| setne 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abuseThis poem has a wonderful tone and atmosphere. I feel like the poem itself is a path of dreams, with words melting into one and rich imagery playing out all around. A creative and well-written poem. Good work and many thanks for the review of my poem ("Moonswimming"), on my other profile, Anaare. |
| In.the.Wardrobe 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abusewow. brilliant work. the flow was great and word choice perfect. there's not really much i can say except what i already have. great job. |
| Zero-Sum 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abusecreative word comibnations... i especially like "duskydust" |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseAlthough I am not stupid, I am not quite sure that I know what "Phantasmagorical" means. It seems like a nice idea though. Good work. Keep writing. = ) |