This poem has a wonderful tone and atmosphere. I feel like the poem itself is a path of dreams, with words melting into one and rich imagery playing out all around. A creative and well-written poem. Good work and many thanks for the review of my poem ("Moonswimming"), on my other profile, Anaare.

wow. brilliant work. the flow was great and word choice perfect. there's not really much i can say except what i already have. great job.

creative word comibnations... i especially like "duskydust"

Although I am not stupid, I am not quite sure that I know what "Phantasmagorical" means. It seems like a nice idea though. Good work. Keep writing. = )