"and I am transparent,

made of my own words,

that turned to sand,"

This is beautiful... and I wish I could say I exist, but I'm not sure if that's true just yet. Maybe someday...

Cassandra

I don't want to live to their standards either. Wonderful job!

Twilight Starr

I kinda like this. Pretty. )

good work. keep writing.

Very nice. Awesome, amazing poem. Well written. *thumbs up*. Write on!

Anna _