|Reviews for teach me|
| thedarksideoflovingme 12/10/07 . chapter 1
I'm too lazy to log in. I really like this. Although, yes I am an annoying person, Existance doesn't have an A it is Existence and Existant is Existent. Yeah, I said I was annoying, did I forget anal? lol But seriously, I do like this it reminds me of things that go through my own mind once (I lie it's alot) in a while.
how to not be a victim
| Twilight Starr 11/16/07 . chapter 1
Sometimes we just don't feel normal. I really don't believe in "normal". Great poem. Good luck with poetry and life.
| smile for the sunshine 11/13/07 . chapter 1
haha, but isn't it so completely normal to be insane?
I kinda like this description. It was nice. The poem appeared to be well written but I think that some of the commas that were used were unnecessary. I think you could have said the same thing without them.
Good work. )