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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a wonderful day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| sweden 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abusethe format is great. it reminds me of -what's it called- ah! slam poetry! it has rhymes that can go along with a beat. excellent. |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseI love the format. It is incredibly unique and wonderful. Your poem speaks some truth. At least truth that I have felt before. Good work at conveying the emotion. = ) |