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Liastoria Alestera 2008-09-02 . chapter 2
Hey, this is cool! pls continue to post! :)
Utah Dynamo 2007-12-25 . chapter 2
i would love to sign an autograph as Napolean Dynamite actually but ND is from Idaho i'm from utah so that make's him idaho dynamo and I'm utah dynamo
Mally Lunacy 2007-12-22 . chapter 2
Hi there, I know I'm really late and everything for the contest but I just wanted to fill in an application cause I thought it'd be fun ^-^

Mally L~


The Official Application for FictionPress’s Top Fiction Character

Name: Helena

Gender: female

Age: 16

Weight: 110.1

Hair color and style: straight Black hair that goes to her shoulders

Eye color: gray/blue

Complete personality description (include both good and bad qualities):

(A.N. she lives in the early 1800's) She's very quiet and shy. She tends to be by herself or with her two sisters helping with chores. She doesn't want to grow up and marry and have kids but instead wants to play in the grave yard with her pet spider King Henry.

Likes: playing in the grave yard with her pet spider, reading, and wandering around the village

Dislikes: Her rival Tom and village boys that beat her up

Allergies: none

Addictions: cookies and talking to King Henry

Background info (only note the events that affect how your OC is now):
1) Her mother died when she was 6

2) Having nightmares


Special abilities, if any (able to shoot a gun and not miss, can see into the future, etc.): She's just your average jane lol I try to keep her character as real as possible

Fears: herself

Strengths: loyalty towards her friends and family and courage

Weaknesses: her mothers death and when Tom and herself stopped being friends

Special item(s) (a ring her fiancé gave her, his first tattoo, etc.): King Henry's jar and her red scarf

I specialize in this/these genre(s) (meaning, this is the kind of story your OC is from). X all that apply:
Humor
Romance x
Suspense x
Thriller x
Mystery
Action/Adventure X
Drama
Parody
Fantasy x
Sci-Fi
Angst
Family
Friendship
Comfort/Hurt
Crime
Tragedy x
Spiritual
Horror x
Western
Supernatural X

Why should your character be FictionPress’s Top Fiction Character?

Probably because she's not your average 'girl' character. She's not a beautiful warrior princess nor is she a sexy vamp or werewolf nor is she a typical girl hero she's just an average quiet/shy girl living in the 1800's who happens to get herself thrust into a horror like fairytale that she never wanted to be apart of.
Estora 2007-12-18 . chapter 1
WOOHOO! Katie's great! The perfect little angel on the outside...I can't wait for the other characters to find out that her treasured possession is a rug that /used/ to be her sister's cat...

Anyway. Thank you for letting Katie be part of this!

Cheers,

~ Estora ~
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-Creator of Katie, who stars in "Katie Did It", and has a...well...sort-of-appearance-but-not-really-but-kinda in "Katie Did It: Alternate"...
Little Miss Whatsherface 2007-12-11 . chapter 2
Woohoo! An update! You got Scarlet pretty much right. Just remember she's sort of on the sarcastic side. She's nice to people though, except when they're mean to her.

Yay! Looks like Scarlet is making friends with Katie. That be cool if that friendship progress in your story! Can't wait for aonther update and to vote. Hurry up now and update! ^_^
Sing.it.like.you.mean.it 2007-12-10 . chapter 2
Yay it's finally up!!

Alright, so for Troy, seeing as he's based on someone I know, is quite a complicated person... He tends to be quiet and serious around people he doesn't know/his elders, saying very little and tending not to smile or express emotion, unless necessary. But around his friends/peers, that's a totally different story. He's all laughs and such around them, pertaining to the situation.
You pretty much had it down though. :D
Oh and just fyi, his mother is from India and his father from Trinidad.
DancerofTap 2007-11-25 . chapter 1
I vote for Rhuben Jackson from My Mixed Up Life. It's by BlackFire101.
chatixrawrr 2007-11-18 . chapter 2
The Official Application for FictionPress’s Top Fiction Character
Name: Elizabeth Donaldson
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Weight: About 110
Hair color and style: Black, thick, curly hair that is two inches down her back.
Eye color: Dark Brown.
Complete personality description (include both good and bad qualities): She’s a kind person at first. She only gives you one chance though, and if you mess it up, she has nothing more to do with you. She’s sweet but evil when the time calls for it. She’s intelligent, endearing, thoughtful, and she likes to have fun. She also has a non-caring perspective at many things.
Family: All she has is her mother. Her father left when he found out her mother was pregnant, and the rest of her family abandoned all hope on her and her mother.
Likes: To listen to music, to party, to write stories (though most are usually found unfinished, lying on her bedroom floor), to study, her friends, Reeses, and scenery.
Dislikes: Liars, boring days, Lima beans, her mother, and the scent of drugs
Allergies: None.
Addictions: Music and writing
Background info (only note the events that affects how your OC is now): Her father left before she was even born, and left her mother to raise her all alone. Her mother then turned to drugs, alcohol, and sex to deal with her problems, and verbally abused Elizabeth on a daily basis.
Special abilities, if any (able to shoot a gun and not miss, can see into the future, etc.): None really.
Unusual habits: She can eat a large bag of Reeses in one day and not gain a pound.
Fears: Death, God, and being broke.
Strengths: Her personality, her non-caring attitude.
Weaknesses: Some find her non-caring attitude to be a weakness.
Special item(s) (a ring her fiancé gave her, his first tattoo, etc.): A sterling silver necklace that she found at church.
I specialize in this/these genre(s) (meaning, this is the kind of story your OC is from). X all that apply:
Humor
Romance X
Suspense X [kind of]
Thriller
Mystery
Action/Adventure
Drama X
Parody
Fantasy
Sci-Fi
Angst
Family
Friendship X
Comfort/Hurt X
Crime
Tragedy X
Spiritual
Horror
Western
Supernatural X
Why should your character be FictionPress’s Top Fiction Character? She’s someone that many people can relate to. She can have you anxious for more, and she is very entertaining.
StarStudent 2007-11-17 . chapter 2
The Official Application for FictionPress’s Top Fiction Character

Name: Emelda Jones

Gender: Female

Age: Fifteen

Weight: Average

Hair color and style: Chestnut, and in a neat, chin-length bob

Eye color: Hazel

Complete personality description (include both good and bad qualities): Emelda is a quiet and thoughtful fifteen year old girl, who stands out among her peers as being very strange. She tries hard not to fit in, and because of this, finds that she is distinctly unpopular. She thinks a lot about the way people's minds work, and society. She doesn't judge people if she can help it, and she's a loyal friend. She's acknowledged at her school as a freak, and so is quite lonely, but she's also optimistic, and doesn't let it show that she is affected by the bullying.

Family: Enormous, loving, noisy and all completely bizarre. She lives with her mum, dad, nan, grandad and various brothers and sisters, and her house is always full of members of her extended family.

Likes: Nature, debating about serious issues, her best friend Kyle, being right.

Dislikes: Most human tendencies, fitting in, always moving on.

Allergies: None

Addictions: None

Background info (only note the events that affects how your OC is now): She has lived in too many places to count, and has never really had any friends, because she's so strange. Emelda moves on frequently, and a lot of the time, nobody even notices that she's gone, but if they get to know her, she has a big impact.

Special abilities, if any (able to shoot a gun and not miss, can see into the future, etc.): She can make people think properly about things.

Unusual habits: Everything she does is unusual.

Fears: Becoming too attached to a place to move on.

Strengths: Her ability to make people think.

Weaknesses: The fact that she doesn't fit in could be percieved as a weakness.

Special item(s) (a ring her fiancé gave her, his first tattoo, etc.): A spider named Sid, and an English project done with her friend Kyle, although she loses both of these.

I specialize in this/these genre(s) (meaning, this is the kind of story your OC is from). X all that apply:

Humor

Romance

Suspense

Thriller

Mystery

Action/Adventure

Drama

Parody

Fantasy

Sci-Fi

Angst

Family x

Friendship x

Comfort/Hurt

Crime

Tragedy

Spiritual

Horror

Western

Supernatural

Why should your character be FictionPress’s Top Fiction Character? She is different than any other character you will ever read about, guaranteed. She really makes people think, and she is intended to make a point.
wolfrider123 2007-11-16 . chapter 1
On Jesse Hartfeild's application, Robert Goodchild is her trainer/boss man. Jesse has a bad temper and an attitude sometimes. And she is sad when Goodchild is disappointed in her...when she thinks that she did a good job
counting ufos 2007-11-16 . chapter 2
The Official Application for FictionPress’s Top Fiction Character

Name: Hickory Smith

Gender: Male

Age: i guess about 38ish

Weight: um...180

Hair color and style: auburn, short

Eye color: blue

Complete personality description (include both good and bad qualities): he's impatient, charming, a tad bit paranoid, righteous, tough, sarcastic, witty, affectionate, caring, demanding, a little tactless.

Family: he has a wife, Mabel, and a horse, Arby

Likes: iced tea, guns, his wife, his horse, Jed the sheriff, chewing tobacco, Charlie the bartender

Dislikes: criminals, trespassers, heat

Allergies: none, really.

Addictions: chewing tobacco and iced tea

Background info (only note the events that affects how your OC is now): well, he was brought up on lemonade, he got sick of it, and was introduced to iced tea and he fell in love with it. he has bad luck when it comes to trying to help others, like when he tried to save his wife's shop. karma is definitely not on his side.

Special abilities, if any (able to shoot a gun and not miss, can see into the future, etc.): he can shoot a gun and not miss. he's very good at making people, especially Charlie, uncomfortable with his compliments.

Unusual habits: tapping his foot. although it's not unusual, i just can't think of one.

Fears: lemon seeds, spiders, and gorillas.

Strengths: shooting, running, riding his horse, complimenting people

Weaknesses: he has basically no tact

Special item(s) (a ring her fiancé gave her, his first tattoo, etc.): his cowboy hat.

I specialize in this/these genre(s) (meaning, this is the kind of story your OC is from). X all that apply:

Humor

Romance

Suspense

Thriller

Mystery

Action/AdventureX

Drama

Parody

Fantasy

Sci-Fi

Angst

Family

Friendship

Comfort/Hurt

Crime

Tragedy

Spiritual

Horror

WesternX (it's true.)

Supernatural

Why should your character be FictionPress’s Top Fiction Character?
i think he's very original. not a lot of people write westerns and even though it's not a fully developed plot and story, Hickory is an interesting character and I hope to expand him a bit. Western isn't my genre, but I'm hoping I did it justice with Hickory and what not. Plus, he's a funny guy with his iced tea obsession.

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Sesshoumaru-0086 2007-11-15 . chapter 1
On Morgan Lunar's Background info in the application, it should be about 20 years ago, not 20...
Sesshoumaru-0086 2007-11-15 . chapter 2
The Official Application for FictionPress’s Top Fiction Character

Name: Morgan Lunar

Gender: Male

Age: 2050+ yrs (appears to be in his late 20's)

Weight: 218

Hair color and style: White and 18th century fashion

Eye color: Royal blue

Complete personality description (include both good and bad qualities): Despite his dark past, he's now a very wise and very holy man bent on completing his mission to God.

Family: His twin brother who represented Lust in the Deadly Seven

Likes: To mentor and teach

Dislikes: When the Soldiers have teenage emotional problems...

Allergies: None, he's a supernatural human

Addictions: Occasional Smoker and drinker

Background info (only note the events that affects how your OC is now): (THIS IS A SPOILER TO MY STORY AND HASN'T BEEN POSTED SO BEWARE!) About 20 years ago, he was a part of a 7-man group called "Deadly Seven" that was established after the Ancient 4 soldiers' death and were obsessed with the 7 deadly sins. Each one represented greed, gluttony, lust, pride, envy, sloth, and anger(Morgan represented Envy). They had stolen the Seven Jewels of Peace or Destruction and used them against humanity. Of course this angered God (in whom the group didn't believe in), took their power, and banished six members of the group to Hell. Morgan was afraid of Hell and begged for forgivness and salvation. Seeing his plight, God said if he guided and mentored the reincarnated 4 soldiers of the Magic Circle to victory over the evil Pharoahnine and he would earn his halo and allowed into heaven.

Special abilities, if any (able to shoot a gun and not miss, can see into the future, etc.): When he was in the Deadly Seven, he had power over the Darkness Jewel. Now he holds a mysterious power that is hardly explainable.

Unusual habits: When there's a full moon he'll sleep outside under it...

Fears: Pharoahnine regaining enough power to take over the Earth

Strengths: Wisdom

Weaknesses: Physical strength

Special item(s) (a ring her fiancé gave her, his first tattoo, etc.): A Rosery, Catholic Bible, and a Crucifix all which he believes gives him hope.

I specialize in this/these genre(s) (meaning, this is the kind of story your OC is from). X all that apply:

Humor

Romance

Suspense

Thriller

Mystery

Action/Adventure X

Drama

Parody

Fantasy X

Sci-Fi

Angst

Family

Friendship

Comfort/Hurt

Crime

Tragedy

Spiritual X

Horror

Western

Supernatural X

Why should your character be FictionPress’s Top Fiction Character? I think he's the most insprirational and quite frankly the best character I had ever come up with! WISDOM IS HOT!
wolfrider123 2007-11-15 . chapter 2
The Official Application for FictionPress’s Top Fiction Character

Name:Jesse Anne Hartfield

Gender:female

Age:20

Weight:130

Hair color and style:Long black waves, with red in it

Eye color: sea green eyes, looks like broken glass

Complete personality description (include both good and bad qualities):She is kind of spastic at points with her friends..but when it comes to demon slaying, (monsters o), she is all down to business. She is very determined, and she does not take any crap from anyone. She really does like vampires even though she kills them.

Family:She lives by herself, she moved out of the house when she was 18, she is very different from them, a night person

Likes:to read, write, run...go out with her friends(Zach, Eden, Melissa)and doing her job...

Dislikes:hates when Goodchild is disappointed with, whe she thinks she does a good job. She has a bad temper and a bad attitude.

Allergies:nothing that she is aware of...

Addictions:to reading, writing, fighting

Background info (only note the events that affects how your OC is now):she was nothing like her family, her brother is a surfer dude and her parents parents are "perfect", she hated being with them because they treated her bad, and she was different.

Special abilities, if any (able to shoot a gun and not miss, can see into the future, etc.):she was a direct decendent of Van Helsing, had his genes...she can fight and she senses things like a sixth sense or something

Unusual habits: she always collects a token from everything she kills, turns it into some sort of trophy...

Fears:of being killed instead of killing...

Strengths:her sixth sense, and her combat

Weaknesses: she loves vampires

Special item(s) (a ring her fiancé gave her, his first tattoo, etc.):a necklace that her best friend gave her when 13, it is silver chain with the trinity

I specialize in this/these genre(s) (meaning, this is the kind of story your OC is from). X all that apply:

Humor x

Romance x

Suspense x

Thriller

Mystery

Action/Adventure x

Drama

Parody

Fantasy x

Sci-Fi x

Angst

Family

Friendship x

Comfort/Hurt

Crime

Tragedy

Spiritual

Horror

Western

Supernatural x

Why should your character be FictionPress’s Top Fiction Character?Becasue i think that she will grow into a great erson, who is awlays there for her friends and will get the job done. She will always be the same, but she will change greatly.

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A/N: If you have any questions, feel free to ask!
DreamWeaver010 2007-11-14 . chapter 2
The Official Application for FictionPress’s Top Fiction Character

Name: Deianirra aka Day

Gender: female

Age: 19

Weight: 147lbs

Hair color and style: light brown with gold highlights, wavy but not really curly, usually worn down or pulled back into a loose ponytail

Eye color: rich-soil brown

Complete personality description (include both good and bad qualities): Day is really rather quiet, but when she speaks everyone listens. Because she is a wolf shape-shifter and the alpha female of a pack, she garners a lot of respect from those around her. She is exceedingly protective of her father, who has recently been diagnosed with cancer. Though she tries to be understanding and a good leader, recent events have left her hands lightly dipped in the blood of a subordinate pack member.
Family: her father, her fiancé Kaden

Likes: sitting on the porch of her woodland cabin, feeling the natural world around her, reading, running as a wolf

Dislikes: being followed, rude people

Allergies: nothing that she’s aware of

Addictions: making love with Kaden

Background info (only note the events that affect how your OC is now):
1) Day’s mother died while in the form of a wolf when Day was eight. A hunter shot and skinned her.
2) The recent forest fire that destroyed much of the woodland area around Day’s home also destroyed her den and has shaken her badly.
3) Kaden proposed to her and she discovered around a month ago that she’s pregnant.
Special abilities, if any (able to shoot a gun and not miss, can see into the future, etc.): Day can shift into a wolf. It’s a natural ability that her mother had and Day was born with.
Unusual habits: Day has a bad tendency to leave her bed at night to roam the woods as a wolf.

Fears: wildfires

Strengths: leadership abilities, calm during chaos

Weaknesses: anything that reminders her of her mother, a tendency to put decisions off

Special item(s) (a ring her fiancé gave her, his first tattoo, etc.): Day has a pendent of a leaping wolf that she found in her mother’s jewelry box when she was five.

I specialize in this/these genre(s) (meaning, this is the kind of story your OC is from). X all that apply:
Humor
Romance X
Suspense
Thriller
Mystery
Action/Adventure X
Drama
Parody
Fantasy
Sci-Fi
Angst
Family X
Friendship
Comfort/Hurt X
Crime
Tragedy
Spiritual
Horror
Western
Supernatural X

Why should your character be FictionPress’s Top Fiction Character? To promote awareness of shape-shifters in the world.

(On a side note of random curiosity, how did you come to PM me? Are you PM a lot of people?)
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