nice story

more! :)

This is totally awesome! I love a happy ending! The past few love stories I've read have ended in tragedy. I was so glad this one ended well!

I think your story is pretty good so far. Im quite interested to see where your characters are going to go in the end.. Keep writing!

that im a cheerleader thang cracked me up.

KAT THIS IS AMAZING!

Like seriously, im pissed cuz it came to an end.

God, I love it.

and Ive got Miss Emily Reading it too.

Hell yeah, your amazing.

That was great! You're going on my author alert list for sure and I'll be reading more of your work soon.

I think this is the best story of this type I've read - that's complete honesty. I've really enjoyed it so far and I think you've handled the emotions well, which can be a downfall of many stories, at least in my opinion. I don't think I can fault anything...nope nothing comes to mind so basically, I loved it, your great and I hope to read more soon D

All the updates continue to look pretty awesome.

The story is great so far, but I can't believe there's already 15 chapters. They seemed to go by so quickly.

Someone a lot smarter than me once told me, "Date who you want they'll (people) get over it, do what makes you happy," and that's what Candy's doing. Rock on babe! I really hope that Candy is happy now because it would totally suck for her if Rianne left her or if the relationship went sour and she gave everything up for nothing. And I really feel bad about how her parents are taking it, parents are suppose to be supportive, even if they don't necessarily approve of what their kids do. Anyway, it's good! I just hope Candy is sure she made the right decision for her because once it's too late...well it's too late.

I just wanted to say again that this is coming along beautifully, and you're keeping me interested and involved through the whole thing. I really like your characters, they're realistic and intriguing, and I can't wait to know how you end this.

Update as soon as you can!

I really like the new chapters. You've got a great sense of pacing that always keeps me interested in the story. You portrayed April's reaction very realistically, not perfectly accepting but not going to abandon her friend. Tolerant, as you said, is a good word for it. (Did you hear the quote from Martha Stewart at the GLAAD awards? "I don't want tolerance. You can tolerate a bad pair of shoes. I want acceptance." (not sure if that's word for word, but it's at least very close) But tolerance is definitely better than nothing) I like the details you put in about Rianne's mom and her sculpture. She sounds pretty cool. There were a few minor typos, but I think you'll see them immediately upon proofreading (mostly they were missing letters, and there was an instance in chapter 14, I think it was, where you said that Candy was saying something when it was really Rianne talking.)

Candy seems to have some issues. I don't know how Rianne can stand it. Isn't that the second time that's happened?

The page break thing happened to me, too. I still haven't gone back and fixed some of my stories. Man, Candy sounds like she was a very mean kid when she was younger. Nice work.

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Her parents obviously hate the idea. I wonder if she'll do live with Rianne and her family if they kick her out. Maybe they'll see it's real and accept it. Well done.

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That last sentence makes it sound like there will be lots of trouble in the future. ;) Nice work.

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