Great chapter. I wonder if Candy will do it. She would be handing over her popularity and reputation to be stomped on. Then the students don't sound very accepting. Nice work.

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That's so sad. Poor Rianne. That can't be fun. Have a lovely day.

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Update please.

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Amazing really, I love the forbidden romance.

Aww, that's adorable. Nice way to end a chapter.

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They got back together or together (however you want to put it). That's so cute.

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Things aren't looking good for the two lovebirds. I bet the whole school is going to hear about that scene.

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Ah, she gave into peer pressure. That isn't good. Rianne's mom sounds like a character. It sounds like everyone at their school is really judgmental. Nice work.

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Aww it's so sweet! And I really don't care about the whole typo thing, it's okay. Rianne and Candy sound so cute together! Candy should get rid of her bf! I like alot! Update soon!

This was a beautiful chapter. I really like the way this story is going. It's nice to see the character development of Candy. There were a few typos in the new chapters, but nothing major. Mainly it was missing commas and things. I love how you described the sunset and the kiss.

I am really, really starting to like this! You're keeping the story going so smoothly and steadily, and developing your characters so well. I really hope all goes well for Candy and Rianne.

I love the book 'Annie On My Mind,' by the way )

This was really sweet.

And thanks for clearing that up about the vegetarianism. I was a bit confused about that, but I thought maybe Candy just didn't eat red meat, or something.

Great job with these last few chapters! I really enjoy.

I cannot believe Candy just did that. Getting drunk and everything. The way you wrote her speech was pretty funny. And the line where April called Candy fake would have made me angry, but Candy just accepted it. That's kind of sad.

I like how Candy is torn between being her own person and being this person she has worked so hard to establish.

And that Rianne's mother had feathers coming out of her jeans was hilarious.

I decided to read this one. I am loving it so far. I do hope that you continue. The last bit about butterfly kisses was so sweet - My older sister used to give me butterfly kisses all the time; it was our special "thing" we did.

I can see what you were saying about the relevance of pop culture references in some stories. I've never heard of Tegan and Sara before, so now I am learning some new things. Thanks for broadening my mind!

Anyway, I think you are doing a good job with this. The characters are great and the story is very engaging. I will definitely read more of this when it is available.

Candy and Rianne are so cute together! I really like your characters and writing style. Please update soon.