 SecondHandSonata 2007-11-13 . chapter 1I suppose you meant for this to be ambiguous?
There's a fine line between maintaining ambiguity and just leaveing your reader in the dark.
Please, give us a flashlight.
Other than that, it's very well-written, and very nice. I suppose it all makes sense in you head. (I get this problem with my writing all the time. =D)
Love,
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