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| Jaeiyola 2007-11-14 ch 1,  | abuseReally, extremely powerful. The Japanese in this, makes it more personalized; a deeper connection between these two people. It makes me want to know more, how and why it lead to that regret, and if there was anything he/she could do about it. But this piece is beautiful in this exact and simplified way, and I couldn't wish for it to be anything but this. Reminds me of my own regrets and maybe one day we'll all take that chance and just leap for the best. Thanks, you've made my morning. |
| Night Silver's whisper 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseHow beautiful...what wonderful flow...what grace... I wish streamers of flattery upon you. Night Silver's Whisper |