 Cirien Phoenix 2009-02-11 . chapter 1That was great. I'm so glad you adhered to the standard of haiku syllables as well since so many people don't seem to. One minor flaw is that the word "summers" should be "summer's".
~Cirien Phoenix
P.S. Thanks for the review on "Snow Angel." I'm glad you liked it. I had just written it spur of the moment. :) |