that is a very sweet flash back every one is human no can truly be made of stone.
CGIB

looks good I like it your characters are real, some times it can be hard to find ones who aren't realistic. Can't wait for more
CGIB

I noticed a few spelling/grammar issues in the first 5 chapters, but they didn't affect the reading in any way. I like the way the story is going so far, and how it changes from character to character. It keeps a constant suspense to what happens next for each person. Keep up the suspense at the ends of chapters, even if it is heart breaking to see that there isn't a next chapter to complete the suspense xD Keep the story going, don't ever give up writing! >:O!