Wow, you've updated LOADS since I last had a spare moment to check this out :p
Yay ^_^
They got it on.
Such things make me happy

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Trunks

I really like the change in direction in the character in the recent chapters! Her vaulnerability in the new city and a new home situation is nakedly showing her personality and her mind to us readers. But I really would like to care a little more about her character and also the character or Angel...

You are probably going somewhere with his character and we haven't had a lot of time to get to know him and feel for him... but right now he's just a name... good job though!

Looking forward to more!

O_O screaming for an update works!

WOOT WOOT

MORE!

D: UPDATE

I liked this story. While it may be amusing, I don't have much attatchment to the protagonist. But I love your style of writing. Do you live in the Mid-West? I learned people who live in the Mid-West talk fast.

I love her personality though, strong, confident, but also a dreamer.

I don't get why Eiden (who I thought was a boy) and Maggie didn't want to see the rocker ever again. Do they do one-night stands all the time? Isn't Maggie even happy that she found Dash? She didn't seem that upset when she was going at it.

I like the subject of faeries. Sorry. I always spell it like that. Anyway, I like the subject because it's not over used. Look, I like Twilight and Blood and Chocolate, but THERE'S TOO MANY VAMPIRE AND/OR WEREWOLF STUFF COMING OUT!!

This should be interesting...

**, these girls are hardcore. Ace work.

o, hotel room. Sorry, naughty thougts. Another brillant chapter.

Dude, that is awesome. I love this. You should definitely try to get it published.

This is very good so far. I'd bet you could actually get this published and made into an actual book. Good goin and keep it up, and I'll keep this safe in my favorites.

'I am Maggie; the punk-rock-teeny-bopper-club-hopping-folk-enthusiast. I am unclassifiable.' A subtle sense of humor is more enjoyable than a gross one. She does take herself so very seriously, doesn't she?

I do NOT like Dash at all. He's such a putabout.;

Also, passion tea? What a gay :p (speaking of which, best euphamism ever - "he... lost the front door key")

Zomg, no! As if she slept with him! But... but...
What about Angel? *cries*
Hungover school really sucks. I know the feeling :p

Aww, Angel is so sweet! They should DEFINATELY get it on :p

I think you know what I'm about to say next, but I'm going to say it anyway: I need more!

*Gasp!* A drag queen faerie! Genius!

I was so happy when I checked my inbox this morning and found these new chapters were up... Even though I'm supposed to be updating my own stuff, it's worth breaking off for this :D

I usually find teen-age angst as boring as hell; however I read both chapters. Also, it was refreshing to read something so well written. (You have a couple of puntuation mistakes -- the lives of therapists or therapists' lives, either is correct; therapists lives isn't, for one--and a few sentence fragments spoiling the page, but on the whole, it was a pleasure to read.) I look forward to reading more.