Reviews for A Collection Of Poems I

Reviews For: A Collection Of Poems I

lonely silhouette 2008-05-16 ch 4,	abuseI am so sorry. I wish you the best. Gosh... But anyways, about the collection...very well written. Lots of emotion. Brief, but not too short or long and boring. Nice job. Thanks for the review, by the way! --A Raindrop's Shadow
lonely silhouette 2008-05-16 ch 3,	abuseThe word choice isn't the best in the world, but I liked this chapter too. The last couple lines were great!
lonely silhouette 2008-05-16 ch 2,	abuseIf they did this to you, they will do it to others. Eventually, it will happen to them. They'll get what they deserve. Anyways, I like this...lots of emotion (obviously)
Dom-oh-chxn 2008-04-01 ch 4,	abuseAlmost made me cry. I know what you're going through, and I'm sorry. I'm here for you if you need me.
ShadowFane 2008-03-24 ch 4,	abuseReminders...All of it...God, I'm sorry...Nothing like tears to wake up memories, is there?...I'm sorry... Liz
Bandits Sonado 2007-11-14 ch 4,	abuseI often think about the first two lines alot lately.. Well written poem of betrayel, you know what you're doin and what your subject in a poem is. I like that, makes you a good writer. Can't wait to get happier poems out of you though! Lol. ~Ray
Bandits Sonado 2007-11-14 ch 3,	abuseLots of imagery. Lots of emotion.. Well there's lots of emotion in all of them.. But you potray it in all of them very nicely. Very powerful end statement I think. It makes a point. I like this one.. ~Ray
Bandits Sonado 2007-11-14 ch 2,	abuseVery simple but meaningful poem... Gets right to the point without being wordy about it. Cool. ~Ray
Bandits Sonado 2007-11-14 ch 1,	abuseAbout the whole collection: Well written, glad it's not me though.. About this one: ** happens, but you can always do better. At least I'm here for ya? It's nice and short but not lacking in emotion. Good job! ~Ray

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