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| anonymous 2007-12-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseHello, I haven't been on this site in ages, blah. What you're writing is very real and written ...wow. It really speaks for itself. |
| life on rewind 2007-11-14 ch 1,  | abuseGreat poem with good expression of emotions. ANOTHER fellow 14-year old Brit! We rule [/patriotism] Where to begin with this? Good use of description, the piece in my opinion is spoiled by the ZOMG CAPS and the ((brackets)) and the [b]bold[/b]. Your poems should accentuate themselves, you shouldn't need word to do it for you. However, apart from the CAPS whcih I personally can't stand, you use bold and brackets quite well, so I might choose to ignore that one ;P "this is not a poem of tragedy or angst and everything else that teenagers are labelled as these days." And then you proceed to talk about anorexia/bulimia, cutting yourself and fits of depression. Love the irony in this, even if it wasn't intentional. I quite admire your style of writing, it's very unique. Excuse me while I add you to my favourites. I hope to review some more of your work soon. --Sakura |