Wow. This is good.

oh wow... This story is really good, and it's only the beginning. You're doing a great job and the plot is flowing flawlessly. Quite a bit of proof reading and editing needs to be done, but other than that, i love it! Keep up the good work and i hope that you update soon.

i love this story its so good took me a while to get throught it but its awesome please update soon its sounds like its gunna get interesting XD

of course their fake relationship was still on!
but i would like to know what Ages' thoughts are.
i hate Leira's mother! (just had to say *type* it)

Wonderful story, it has a well written plot, humor, family drama, romance angst and some hot scenes, what more can you ask for. I love the relationship between Jay and Leira, he is every girl's dream best friend. Please update soon!

This is a really great story. Thanks for the update, and hope you update soon.

Wonderful story, the type that makes you stay up till 2 in the morning to read it. Can't wait to read what will happen next so make sure you update soon!
P.S. Jay is the coolest gay character I read about ;)

first off - loved the chapter
i love when things get complicated =)
second - leira's family and friends call Age 'James' right?
towards the end of this chapter, her dad calls him 'Age'
i wasn't sure if that was on purpose or not, so I figured i'd mention it
just in case :)
loved the chapter

izzie

Holy freaking cow, I am in LOVE with this storyy! AH, the two of them are absolutely (as Jay would say) tres hot! YOu have to update soon, I'm like on the edge of chair waiting to know what happens next. PLEASE update soon :)

Xoxhp

Enjoying the story thus far :) One point out and one piece of advice though:
Point out: Lucas' (and other names ending in "s") should be Lucas's as a name ending in an "s" takes apostrophe s, not just apostrophe.
Advice: Your story kinda comes across as a wall of text in certain areas, which, especially as it's being read on a PC, can make the lines fuse together sometimes. You might want to consider something like separating your dialogue from the narration so that a) it stands out more and b) it breaks up the wall of text a bit.
Looking forward to getting the next installment of this :)

I swear to god if you take as long as you did to update his chapter!! So ** update!
Peace,
Joker

Wow, I understand that Age cares for Leira but to say hear him say is using her dad for promotion and hopes Leira backs him up on it, is asking for a lot. Man I feel sorry for Leira and I hope she gives Age hell before he gets back to her good graces - well, if she ever manages to trust him again...

Okay I would like to set something straight just for the record: ladies and gentleman (signore e signori). Signore does also mean gentleman (singular vesion). Signori is for men plural.

glad your back. Hope you continue updating this year...

Love It! Keep up the awesome work...i would totally buy this story if i saw it in a bookstore haha