you succeeded with the angst.

I so wish there was more of it.

Odd but cute!

Well, that was incredibly trippy, but amazing nonetheless. I was so confused throught it all, though, and I'm almost positive it wasn't part of my normal confusion. That was possibly the point, I guess. Being confused by what was going on. Either way, it was anenjoyable read that I'm happy distracted my from the glaring heat.

-Turn on the Light!

Amazing. A-freaking-mazing. Absolutly a-freaking-mazing. I love it so much. I wish that it was a hundred chapters long and I could read it forever; I love it so much.

I.. I loved it! It was short, but it was awesome, and dark, and wonderful! Hope you keep writing.

Beautiful, just beautiful.

Wow! I love it! Tim is awesome! And John/Martin/Jake/Joe/Caleb/Cameron/etc is(are) so amazing! Good job!

That was kind of trippy-amazing.

I love it. :]

Well, that was odd.

I loved it. :D

xo