FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Ash Algood 2008-07-05 ch 1,  | abuseWow, taht was acutally really good. It was suspenceful, which is something i always like in a story. Gabriel's lucky he got 2 travel in time, of course he had 2 die though nd taht sucks |