You're so amazing at referring to love as something else. It's among your talents. Your metaphors are absolutely amazing.

You do however, have typos. Sorry, grammar is a pet peeve of mine. It's completely viable though I suppose, if your first language is Spanish. I don't expect you to go back and correct all the typos, because you don't have to (I know I wouldn't). But like I said, my only contradiction is typos, and some missing articles and words.

I did like this poem. Once again, I'm so amazed by the way you can refer to love as so many different things. Amazing is the only word I can think of to describe it.

I love your writing style, the way you phrase things. It's remarkable, really.

Lovely poetry.

Luna Turner

This was really good, it felt more like a short story or a song than a poem, but good job!

Aw, that is really sad but I loved it. )

Amazing. Keep it up.