hey... lol... you know you are the reason i create accounts on things?? lol... i loved it! when will you write the next part? are you going to write a next part? please please please do! lol... i love the reference to anne rice's lestat... and that you were like 'not all vampires are beautiful' lol... that's so true...

While good, it moves too fast. He goes from hating the vampire, to just staying with him, not even trying to get away. This has the potential to be a story in my pov. So, aside from the fast pace, this was very good. And like I said, toss around the idea of making it a story, it'd be good.
Faith