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| kuriqa 2007-11-19 ch 1,  | abusehey... lol... you know you are the reason i create accounts on things?? lol... i loved it! when will you write the next part? are you going to write a next part? please please please do! lol... i love the reference to anne rice's lestat... and that you were like 'not all vampires are beautiful' lol... that's so true... |
| Faith Adeline 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseWhile good, it moves too fast. He goes from hating the vampire, to just staying with him, not even trying to get away. This has the potential to be a story in my pov. So, aside from the fast pace, this was very good. And like I said, toss around the idea of making it a story, it'd be good. Faith |