Hehe... That was funny. ^.^

Good job! Love it! Update soon!

why do you have so many stories going on at once? Just wondering. Oh, I like this so far. I just don't KNOW anyone. So, can you put a belated introduction somewhere?

Just wondering, where is the makeup artist? Can you introduce the characters, I don't know who anyone is.

great chapter! i loved it! update soon!

I liked this chapter update soon.

I think this chapter is great I love the story so far. What is up with the rape thing thats weird! I didnt get that...update soon.

i like this so far! update soon!

I'm really loving this story. i would like to see the character personalities stand out more, to give a shock to the readers, a subtle one, but enough to give the readers something to come back to. But we're only in the second chapter. I love Aiden already becasue of his helping kids out. and I'm beginning to like Page... i always like the heroes before the heroines.

As long as you update regularly, lots of readers will love and review you stories. especially me!!

i like this story i think it has great potential