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| blackoblivion13 2008-04-25 ch 3,  | abuseHehe... That was funny. ^.^ |
| Lynn-Night 2007-11-24 ch 3, | abuseGood job! Love it! Update soon! |
| Evil Angel of DOOM 2007-11-19 ch 3, | abusewhy do you have so many stories going on at once? Just wondering. Oh, I like this so far. I just don't KNOW anyone. So, can you put a belated introduction somewhere? |
| Evil Angel of DOOM 2007-11-19 ch 2, | abuseJust wondering, where is the makeup artist? Can you introduce the characters, I don't know who anyone is. |
| amrawo 2007-11-19 ch 3, | abusegreat chapter! i loved it! update soon! |
| Nicole Deming 2007-11-19 ch 3, | abuseI liked this chapter update soon. |
| Nicole Deming 2007-11-17 ch 2, | abuseI think this chapter is great I love the story so far. What is up with the rape thing thats weird! I didnt get that...update soon. |
| amrawo 2007-11-17 ch 2, | abusei like this so far! update soon! |
| Jeex 2007-11-17 ch 2, | abuseI'm really loving this story. i would like to see the character personalities stand out more, to give a shock to the readers, a subtle one, but enough to give the readers something to come back to. But we're only in the second chapter. I love Aiden already becasue of his helping kids out. and I'm beginning to like Page... i always like the heroes before the heroines. As long as you update regularly, lots of readers will love and review you stories. especially me!! |
| Nicole Deming 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abusei like this story i think it has great potential |