Aww, I like this!
I love how well you describe your characters. Like... you don't even need to DESCRIBE them, you know? It's like you just know who they are, without even being told. Excellant.
I really liked the ending, really brought it to a nice finish. I imagined it ending in a much different way, but this was very nice. Unexpected, but totally perfect.

-Rawr, from the Review Marathon. The link's in my profile.

Wow that was really good! I liked how strong Lindsay's character was!

Very well written!

♥ Dreaming Chica ♥

this is good