Reviews for Could You Love Me?

Jesse Colton 2008-03-08 ch 1,	abuseIt's beautiful and tragic at once. Tragedies really tear me up inside, so this got hard to read near the end because it's so damn sad. Hopefully the guy in this story will give his friend a chance to save him before killing himself. You've done an amazing job of communicating the speakers feelings, I love it I love it I love it. This is contest-winning good.
erasmuss 2007-12-26 ch 1,	abusePull me off this building, Take the knife from my hand, Remove the bullet from my gun, Cut the rope I’m tying. I fuckin love those lines. I like the bullet one best. I love guns. They are the sex. This is so sweet and sad. Love it. Beutiful. I wasnt to sure on the use of the word baby, but I guess it does fit in some way. I try to avoid the use of words like 'honey' 'baby' and 'darling' in poems, but this somehow works for this.
ProcrastinationLUVSme 2007-11-15 ch 1,	abuseMUA MUA MUAHAHA! I WILL BE THY FIRST REVIEW! Well, then all honesty, i freaking LOVE this poem because it's awesome! Dude, you rock and you are one of my best friends, remember that to your grave! Peace out, holmes!