This will be interesting. I hope you can update soon! I really want to know what happens between Chokichi and Jing Mei. Jari certainly is a genius, isn't he?

This is getting pretty interesting, especially with Chokichi in the mix now.

My favorite couples are KimiXKere, JingXCho and JariXArkas

I hope that they can get it to work. I love the KimiXKere stuff in this chapter but I was kind of grr about Kerebros and Shuukaku. I guess I'm a KimiXKere fan all the way.

Interesting chapter. Kimidashi and Kerebros make a good pair. I'm not fond of Shuukaku but she's cool, I suppose. Maybe I just don't know much about her. I'm sure I'll find out soon!

I love Jari! So far, he's my favorite! I also like the symbolism to possession and things of that nature. Beautiful and creepy, just as the rest of your works are.

A very exciting chapter. Definitely enjoying this story!

I'm so glad that I have the day off. It would take me forever to just review everything over again. You have a good, well-rounded start. The QoD is a very spunky character, out to prove herself to the world. I wonder if she'll achieve her dream.

Wonderful! Nothing like a new character and a little JariArkas action to kick off the new year! Happy New Year to you!

Jing Mei is turning more and more interesting by the second, as are Jari and Arkas (who clearly seem to be having something between themselves that's more then just a frienship, although it's not stated but rather is heavily hinted).

I like how she stood up to him and revealed his face. Jari was definitely suprised by that, wasn't he?

Chokichi seems interesting but I don't know much about him to really tell. I bet things get heated up in the next chapter. I can't wait!

What an interesting turn of events and entrance of a significant character. Now the whole plot is deepening and it's not what I thought it was.

I really like the statement at the end and how it ties into the story so well. Grand job!

It seems that Arkas' plans are underway and I kind of had the feeling that Jing Mei might be killed either way. I wonder how Chokichi will fair against her in the fight. Also, I wonder more about his mysterious character. This ought to be good!

I really like Jari and Arkas. I like Jing Mei's determination too, although I'm worried about her character. I wonder if she's going to really die.

This was a great chapter! I especially like the ending line you used.

Great chapter and I love your action scenes. Jing Mei definitely has potential, unless she's be influenced heavily by Jari's powers.

Chokichi is right about him, the puppet master is a genuis. I also like the ArkasXJari hints in this chapter. I wonder how much that they have shared.

I hope Arkas can turn back into his original form, he's much more pleasing to look at , lol.

Arkas and Jari should totally get together. They have so much chemistry! I hope that Chokichi can snap Jing Mei out of her little spell, then again, it would be interesting to see him face off against Jari too...Write more soon!