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Utena Himemiya 2008-09-16 ch 5, anon.	abuseThis was a really good chapter. I missed this story and loved it's dark and twisted themes. Is Kerebros a demon by any chance? I was just wondering from his actions earlier in the chapter. Please update soon!
Kurogane Black Ninja 2008-09-15 ch 5,	abuseDon't give up on this work yet! You've got a good thing going! I like the way your characters are coming to life. The dreary atmosphere of X is what makes it interesting. I can't wait to see what happens to the Queen of Diamonds and the dead girl. Update soon.
Tragedy of Light and Dark 2008-09-15 ch 5,	abuseUPDATE STORIES FASTER! Damn, do you know how long I had to wait just to read this!? JEEZ! done ranting Anyway, please don't take a long time again. I want a quicker update and Kerebros was awesome! Yay for dog people! Faves: Jari, Kimidashi, Queen of Diamonds, Watashi.
MAMI07 2008-09-15 ch 5, anon.	abuseGud chapter!
Yaoi Love-Love Girl 2008-09-15 ch 5, anon.	abuseTwo updates at once! Woot! I had to read the whole story over again to remember what happened. It's good so far and I can't wait for another update! Please be quicker about it this time or I'll forget the story again. Since everyone is saying their favorites, mine are Jari and Jing Mei. Kerebros is alright but kind of freaky, Kimidashi is okay and Shuukaku seems kinda slutty. shrugs Maybe it was just her entrance. I like the Mosquito King as well. I wonder what he really looks like. When will be see Jari again anyway?
HFGLF 2008-09-15 ch 5, anon.	abuseWell, it's been long enough hasn't it? I almost thought that you gave up on this little piece here. I like the altrication between Kerebros and the two gunman. Kimidashi didn't seem to do anything in the fight so it's nice to see that someone took initiative. ShuukakuXKerebros? I rather like him with Kimidashi myself (even though that seems a little like pedophilia) How old is Kimidashi anyway? I also like the jokes about poor Ichiro. Somehow, I feel sorry for his character. He seems so innocent and everything.
Dark Kurogane 2008-09-15 ch 5, anon.	abuseHiroshima from Sacrifice and Kerebros have a lot in common, they are both sadistic killers at heart. I wonder what will happen with the girl since none of their steps seem to be working. I hope Kimidashi is alright as well. It will be interesting to see how things turn out.
Iruka-sama 2008-09-15 ch 5, anon.	abuseOMG! You brought this story back? Awesome! I almost thought that you quit it on me! Kerebros was awesome in this chapter and I really like the relationship between he and Shuukaku. Kerebros and Kimidashi are my favorites so far! Please update soon! It's been too long!
Mami07 2008-08-07 ch 4, anon.	abuseIt's good
Utena Himemiya 2008-02-29 ch 4, anon.	abuseThis is turning out to be a good story. One of your readers said it reminded them of Tim Burton movies and it really does. It has the same heir as Sweeny Todd, Nightmare Before Christmas and Corpse Bride. It's refreshing to see someone's works quite like this. You give the horror genre a whole new meaning and in a good way.
Yaoi Love-Love Girl 2008-02-28 ch 4, anon.	abuseSuch haunting imagry in this chapter and it was even a little taboo. You have a real knack for the dark. This is even reminiscent of Tim Burton movies to me. Great job!
Kurogane Black Ninja 2008-02-28 ch 4,	abuseThis is a good chapter. I wonder what trouble Kerebros and Kimidashi will run in to with these two people. Update soon!
Tragedy of Light and Dark 2008-02-27 ch 4,	abuseMy favorite characters so far in order: Jari and Kerebros are tied. They are both so damned interesting. Kimidashi and Shuukaku Queen of Diamonds- I wonder who exactly she is aside from a theif. Does she have a real name? What is it? Arkas - I guess he's my last favorite because I don't know anything about him. All of your characters are so great that its hard to pick just one! Kerebros is like the QOD in a way. He didn't really come from X. I wonder where he and the QOD are from. Perhaps they are from the same place? I kind of doubt that but I'm just coming up with theories.
HFGLF 2008-02-27 ch 4, anon.	abuseThis was a little rest chapter but I liked the interaction between Kerebros and Shuukaku. They have a very twisted relationship as master and pet and a little something on the side. Our Queen of Diamonds is also interesting. She seems to hate Jari but hold an interest for him at the same time. How odd. I wonder if she feels attracted to him in a weird way and this was BEFORE she was possessed. I can't wait for the next installment. It sounds so riveting.
truthordeal 2008-02-26 ch 4,	abuseI'm sorry it took so long for me to get my review to you. There weren't really any mistakes that jumped off of the page at me, so I guess you did well for being rushed. I'm glad you answered my question about the doll scene. I understand the rest of the story a little better now. It might have been a long chapter to write, but it seemed too short of a read to me, so please review soon.

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