Reviews for my hands building your house

the naked civil servant 2008-02-16 ch 1,	abuseoh my. such amazing, heartstopping imagery. completely agree about the formatting. the repetition kills me. "no windows in this house your eyes are closed" dear god. and building a house. "sticky but unsure". AH. rarely do i stumble across such wonders. you restore my faith.
jessee parker 2007-11-19 ch 1,	abuse"sticky but unsure looking out your windows and walking down your halls" I love it. Sometimes formatting takes away from the piece, which is what i think it would have done to this. The way that it was broken up added this intensity and somewhat innocence to it. It presented it as kind of more real and raw, not one of those that are pre-perfected. Anyway, i love it. it's one of my favorites for sure. amazing.
rust phoenix 2007-11-15 ch 1,	abuseA nice mix of simplicity and originality. It sounds like a song in my mind. I like it, the repetition works well. "follow you mindlessly follow you endlessly/down and through on legs not meant to last" That's my favorite part.
lucidspiritdreamer7 2007-11-15 ch 1,	abuseFormat or not that was very deep.I'ts a lot like some of my life, And some Of my poetry lol.Very good Though I love it.