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| Elevator Passenger 2008-01-14 ch 1,  | abuseShort and angsty. It's usually hard to find a good one, but yours does the trick. I like how you use some of the same structures and words/phrases to stablish the pattern in the narrator's life. Also, Teddy Geiger is too cute, but way underrated. Nice work. |
| nat van os 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseyou're a great writer! I feel angsty now. =] |
| sweden 2007-12-11 ch 1, | abusethe only bad thing is that it could have been longer :( i was quite sad when I reached the end, but still good nonetheless. i can relate to her. i don't think i'm completely hopeless though |
| EndlessSummer 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this story. You created a strong emotional impact with few words. Good job! |
| funsize 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseomg.. a feeling of hopelessness has kinda overcome me.. dammit.. only the good ones get to me like this.. and i have to say urs is one of them |