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| review 2007-12-15 ch 1,  | abusei really like your layout now haha. the repetition of "the same" is great. creative yet kind of not creative at the same time. its a good combination ;D |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseI like the format.. the /s and the repetition is awesome... I really like the ending to.. love stories with no originality is a great idea |
| Aquafied 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abusedont lose that last line. |
| Princess-anna57 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abuseNice poem! I totally agree with what you've said in this poem. Well done, I applaud you! Write on. ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseI agree. This was nice. The formatting and the whole idea was nice. Good work. Keep writing. = ) |
| Miz E. Mak 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abusei really like your use of capitalization, parenthesis, spacing, dashes, etc... it adds so much to the reading of this brilliant poem. write on. |
| Aslan Israel 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abusehm. Interesting... because every love is not the same... originality. Very nice |
| The Postscript 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseNice! You're frusteration comes across in this poem well. The development flows nicely and the parallel structure works nicely with the message of bland, cliche love poetry. Keep writing, k. |
| Smoky Bear 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseit must be a year or two since i read any of your stuff, so am glad i am online to catch this upload. you always did have a way with style and this is no exception - very well crafted indeed and the structure reflects the theme. love the idea of being paper thin. great poem. |