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2007-12-15
ch 1,
abusei really like your layout now haha.
the repetition of "the same" is great. creative yet kind of not creative at the same time. its a good combination ;D
simpleplan13
2007-12-01
ch 1,
abuseI like the format.. the /s and the repetition is awesome... I really like the ending to.. love stories with no originality is a great idea
Aquafied
2007-11-21
ch 1,
abusedont lose that last line.
Princess-anna57
2007-11-19
ch 1,
abuseNice poem! I totally agree with what you've said in this poem. Well done, I applaud you! Write on.

~Anna~ ^_^
smile for the sunshine
2007-11-16
ch 1,
abuseI agree. This was nice. The formatting and the whole idea was nice. Good work. Keep writing. = )
Miz E. Mak
2007-11-16
ch 1,
abusei really like your use of capitalization, parenthesis, spacing, dashes, etc... it adds so much to the reading of this brilliant poem. write on.
Aslan Israel
2007-11-15
ch 1,
abusehm. Interesting... because every love is not the same... originality.

Very nice
The Postscript
2007-11-15
ch 1,
abuseNice! You're frusteration comes across in this poem well. The development flows nicely and the parallel structure works nicely with the message of bland, cliche love poetry. Keep writing, k.
Smoky Bear
2007-11-15
ch 1,
abuseit must be a year or two since i read any of your stuff, so am glad i am online to catch this upload. you always did have a way with style and this is no exception - very well crafted indeed and the structure reflects the theme. love the idea of being paper thin. great poem.
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