|Reviews for love stories|
| review 12/15/07 . chapter 1
i really like your layout now haha.
the repetition of "the same" is great. creative yet kind of not creative at the same time. its a good combination ;D
| simpleplan13 12/1/07 . chapter 1
I like the format.. the /s and the repetition is awesome... I really like the ending to.. love stories with no originality is a great idea
| Aquafied 11/21/07 . chapter 1
dont lose that last line.
| Princess-anna57 11/19/07 . chapter 1
Nice poem! I totally agree with what you've said in this poem. Well done, I applaud you! Write on.
| smile for the sunshine 11/16/07 . chapter 1
I agree. This was nice. The formatting and the whole idea was nice. Good work. Keep writing. )
| Miz E. Mak 11/16/07 . chapter 1
i really like your use of capitalization, parenthesis, spacing, dashes, etc... it adds so much to the reading of this brilliant poem. write on.
| Aslan Israel 11/15/07 . chapter 1
hm. Interesting... because every love is not the same... originality.
| The Postscript 11/15/07 . chapter 1
Nice! You're frusteration comes across in this poem well. The development flows nicely and the parallel structure works nicely with the message of bland, cliche love poetry. Keep writing, k.
| Smoky Bear 11/15/07 . chapter 1
it must be a year or two since i read any of your stuff, so am glad i am online to catch this upload. you always did have a way with style and this is no exception - very well crafted indeed and the structure reflects the theme. love the idea of being paper thin. great poem.