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Reviews For: I Killed The Moth

Tytherpol
2007-11-18
ch 1,
abusethis is the best poem i have read in a long time.
the descriptions and the simple presentation. just awesome.
i don't think the last line is as strong as it seems like it is.
but this is an incredible poem. great job.
Shalimar Covescent
2007-11-18
ch 1,
abuseSimple yet almost profound. I particularly like the line 'just a smearing of fairy dust...' Very effective.
Smoky Bear
2007-11-15
ch 1,
abuseit's human nature to destroy, and instinct to be the predator. this is a vey effective little poem.
Alec Ritchie
2007-11-15
ch 1,
abuseHmm, very simply yet profondly effective poem.
Something as insignificant as a moth was annoying you, so you ended it but you feel remorse about killing a living thing?
Is the grammar intentional?
theauxiliarycompanion
2007-11-15
ch 1,
abusebecause you are human, and even the smallest of bothers should be destroyed. nice rhyme scheme.
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