Reviews for I Killed The Moth

Tytherpol 2007-11-18 ch 1,	abusethis is the best poem i have read in a long time. the descriptions and the simple presentation. just awesome. i don't think the last line is as strong as it seems like it is. but this is an incredible poem. great job.
Shalimar Covescent 2007-11-18 ch 1,	abuseSimple yet almost profound. I particularly like the line 'just a smearing of fairy dust...' Very effective.
Smoky Bear 2007-11-15 ch 1,	abuseit's human nature to destroy, and instinct to be the predator. this is a vey effective little poem.
Alec Ritchie 2007-11-15 ch 1,	abuseHmm, very simply yet profondly effective poem. Something as insignificant as a moth was annoying you, so you ended it but you feel remorse about killing a living thing? Is the grammar intentional?
theauxiliarycompanion 2007-11-15 ch 1,	abusebecause you are human, and even the smallest of bothers should be destroyed. nice rhyme scheme.