 Green Eyed Angel 2008-10-14 . chapter 1I like this poem. It's really cute, reminds me of myself a bit. I do things without thinking and then look at it and think, "Why?" I liked the "I killed the moth: I wonder why" line really much. |
 Tytherpol 2007-11-18 . chapter 1this is the best poem i have read in a long time.
the descriptions and the simple presentation. just awesome.
i don't think the last line is as strong as it seems like it is.
but this is an incredible poem. great job. |
 Shalimar Covescent 2007-11-18 . chapter 1Simple yet almost profound. I particularly like the line 'just a smearing of fairy dust...' Very effective. |
 Smoky Bear 2007-11-15 . chapter 1it's human nature to destroy, and instinct to be the predator. this is a vey effective little poem. |
 Alec Ritchie 2007-11-15 . chapter 1Hmm, very simply yet profondly effective poem.
Something as insignificant as a moth was annoying you, so you ended it but you feel remorse about killing a living thing?
Is the grammar intentional? |
 theauxiliarycompanion 2007-11-15 . chapter 1because you are human, and even the smallest of bothers should be destroyed. nice rhyme scheme. |