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| by His blood 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abusei feel like i'm going to cry. my youngest sister is almost seven. this was beautifully written and ohsotragic, but you wove more hope and beauty into it than darkness, which is hard to do for a subject like this, and i commend you for it. absolutely gorgeous ... a beautiful, beautiful work of art. absolutely stunning. and, of course, heartbreaking. keep writing -- you have a definite talent and a tender heart that shines through beautifully in your poetry. God bless you. in the peace and love of Christ, alison xx |
| xlovexpollutionx 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abusethis is really gorgeous. i feel like crying, except somehow liberated. i like how it is sad, but then at the end it is happy because she's finally free. excellent work. |
| Smoky Bear 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abusevery emotional and heartfelt. you've carried the themes throughout the poem without letting them run away. this is really nice work and a lovely tribute. the first stanza was excellent! |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseAw, that sad but so precious. Loverly. Wonderful, darling. |