I love how you start with such a common phrase and then turn into such a unique phrase... I love the twist on the phrase later in the piece.. I also like the formatting with the word words and the image of "entangle themselves in my tongue" and ending it with help was just perfect...

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I have to say right away I was able to relate to this poem. Everything is so so true. This poem is really good and I like the way you structured it. Keep writing. You're good.