Reviews for Everything You've Been

foreverandever
2008-01-29
ch 1,

abusei think 'everything you've been' is the perfect title.
this poem says everything you could want to say to your friends in just enough words. i think its a beautiful poem, and i think your friends are very lucky to have you. :)

WriterXO
2007-11-15
ch 1,

abuseDon't let anyone tell you you can't write. Cause if they do...well it's two things. 1)B.S. and 2) they are so jealous. Honestly, I'm like speechless. I don't even know what to put. This poem is REALLY good. Like seriously I love it!! - But, if you don't mind me saying so I would try to think of a different title. The title doesn't do the poem justice. It is a top notch poem and I just feel like the title could be better. - Really hope that didn't sound harsh. I don't know how much better mine would be but here's a thought "Been Everything I've Needed"?? or "In This World You Have Been My Everything"?? Other then that- keep writing...cause you have talent.

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